Wednesday, July 6, 2011

Spark.

Last week, I submitted a personal essay to Asian American Justice Center, which was asking for submissions about what sparked young Asian Americans' passion for justice. I saw a call for entries on AngryAsianMan.com.

I waited til the wee hours of the morning the night of the deadline to write something up. I had a lot of fun working on it. And lo and behold, it was put up online!

I really do love what I wrote, but I have to mention two mistakes I made. At the end of my essay, I say that some of my uncles had a falling out with my aunt. That is not true and I feel terrible that I misunderstood and misrepresented a story my mom told me a couple years ago. I also say in the essay that only my mom supports my cousin Joanne, but in fact, one of my uncles does as well.

If I hadn't written the essay the night of the deadline, I could have checked my facts with my mom before submitting. But I didn't. And now I can't change what was put up. But that is definitely a lesson learned. In writing, especially in writing about personal matters, I have to check my facts.

Aside from those two mistakes, I am proud of the essay and hope you enjoy it!

"The Spark of Love Within"

1 comment:

Kylie said...

lara,
your essay is really wonderfully written and so YOU! It actually made me tear up a bit. I bet your mom is super proud of the young social justice advocate that she helped cultivate in you.
You are truly a gem to this world : )
keep shining, beautiful friend!